Parts of Speech

WHAT ARE THE COMMON MISTAKES THAT YOU ALWAYS DO IN WRITING?
The common mistakes that i always done is i sometimes forgot using the sentence structure, also i am lack of ideas. That's the hard part for me if i got no ideas to do in writing.

DO YOU FIND WRITING IN ENGLISH IS DIFFICULT?
Yes and no. I do find writing in English is difficult but it is the best way to express my feelings through writing in English. So it is either yes or no.

WHAT KIND OF PROBLEM DO YOU FACE WHEN YOU START IN WRITING?
The common problems are lack of ideas, and if i have ideas, my ideas did not organize well, and also sometimes i am out of topic.

WHAT ARE YOUR SUGGESTIONS TO OVERCOME THE PROBLEM?
Always reading English's newspaper, and investigate how they are using the correct word to make a sentences.

Water Pollution

Water pollution is a global plague that affects the people, animals, and plants. These life forms need water to survive. The causes are contributed greatly by the human population. Recently, laws have been passed to protect the precious drinking waters. Although they are in effect, most are ignored or loop holes have been found by major corporations so the can still "legally" dump harmful waste near water supplies. 

There are several factors that causes water pollution. One of the reasons that the water pollution problem is so severe is that it is not actually illegal to dump pollutants into water bodies. Sewage, sludge, garbage, and even toxic pollutants are all dumped into the water. Often, governments either do not care or simply look the other way. Across the world, about half of all sewage is dumped into water bodies in its original form. No efforts are made to disinfect the sewage or to remove especially harmful pollutants. Even if sewage is treated, problems still arise. Treated sewage forms sludge, which is sent out into the sea and dumped. Many cities and countries dump sewage out at sea. Often, they place it not far from their own coastline, often killing all the sea wildlife in the dumping area. In addition to sewage, chemicals dumped by industries and governments are another major source of water pollution. The direct effect of oil spills is horrifying. Thousands of animals suffer a slow, agonizing death. This degrades the enviroment because not every oil soaked carcass is picked up, some wash up on shore for the innocent to walk upon and see. The effects of chemical water pollution are varied and depend on what chemicals are dumped and in what locations by industries. The main effect of chemical water pollution is that it kills life that inhabits water-based ecosystems. Dead fish, birds, dolphins, and many other animals often wind up on beaches, killed by pollutants in their habitat. The chemical poisoning in water have a great impact on humans because it can cause brain damage and physical deformities in unborn fetuses. Pollution disrupts the natural food chain as well. Pollutants such as lead and cadmium are eaten by tiny animals. Later, these animals are consumed by fish and shellfish, and the food chain continues to be disrupted at all higher levels. Eventually, humans are affected by this process as well. People can get diseases such as hepatitis by eating seafood that has been poisoned. Ecosystems can be severely changed or destroyed by water pollution. Many areas are now being affected by careless human pollution, and this pollution is coming back to hurt humans. Water is a vital element of life. The pollution of water greatly affects humans and animals alike. Water pollution harms individuals, degrades the enviroment, and shows the ignorance of polluters. Water pollution is a senseless act that people can help stop.

Writing Process's Stages II

STEP 1: PREWRITING
THINK

• · Decide on a topic to write about.
• · Consider who will read or listen to your written work.
• · Brainstorm ideas about the subject.
• · List places where you can research information.
• · Do your research.

STEP 2: DRAFTING
WRITE

• · Put the information you researched into your own words.
• · Write sentences and paragraphs even if they are not perfect.
• · Read what you have written and judge if it says what you mean.
• · Show it to others and share for suggestions.

STEP 3: REVISING
MAKE IT BETTER

• · Read what you have written again.
• · Think about what others said about it.
• · Rearrange words or sentences.
• · Take out or add parts.
• · Replace overused or unclear words.
• · Read your writing aloud to be sure it flows smoothly.

STEP 4: PROOFREADING
MAKE IT CORRECT

• · Be sure all sentences are complete.
• · Correct spelling, capitalization, and punctuation.
• · Change words that are not used correctly.
• · Have someone check your work.
• · Recopy it correctly and neatly.

STEP 5: PUBLISHING
SHARE THE FINISHED PRODUCT

• · Read your writing aloud to a group.
• · Create a book of your work.
• · Send a copy to a friend or relative.
• · Put your writing on display